I have this print in my apartment. It’s almost perfect, and better without the context of who Minus is. I’d want to remove the “probably”, then I’m happy.
That’s a good idea. The “probably” really is forced. Especially the second one.
I think the “punchline” works better if the serious tension isn’t broken early.
I DM’d you an edit I made, removing “probably”.
I thought about posting it here, but I don’t think we should get in the habit of editing people’s coimcs to our liking and sharing them, probably.
I have this print in my apartment. It’s almost perfect, and better without the context of who Minus is. I’d want to remove the “probably”, then I’m happy.
That’s a good idea. The “probably” really is forced. Especially the second one. I think the “punchline” works better if the serious tension isn’t broken early.
I DM’d you an edit I made, removing “probably”.
I thought about posting it here, but I don’t think we should get in the habit of editing people’s coimcs to our liking and sharing them, probably.
I got the same kind of chills I got when I first saw this comic, before I read through the others by the same artist. It feels… Right. Well done! :D
I have no idea who Minus is and this comic is fantastic.