• Sundray@lemmus.org
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    5 hours ago

    I Walk the corner to the rubble,
    That used to be a library, line up to the mind cemetery now,

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      4 hours ago

      Ugh. I get it, but I dislike poetry that avoids grammar to make something seem deeper than it is.

      I walk to the corner

      To the rubble

      That used to be a library.

      Line up

      To the mind cemetary now.